The graph and table below show average monthly temperatures and average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features.
The driven line graph and the table illustrate average temperatures per month
,
and Remove the comma
apply
average
Correct article usage
the average
number
of hours
of sunlight
per twelve months
period in Correct your spelling
twelve-month
tree
major cities.
Correct your spelling
three
Initially
,from the given table it can be seen that the number
of annual hours
of sunshine for Sydney
and New York
are
relatively close to the same Change the verb form
is
number
, however
in the line graph the peak temperature
belongs to New York
in July. And the highest temperature
during winter belongs to Sydney
.
Turning to the data in more detail it can be seen that the lowest amount of sunlight
during the first month of winter which is below 5 degrees
, is in New York
, then
the second coolest temperature
during the same month belongs to London
it’s slightly less than 10 degrees
,
when it comes Remove the comma
apply
ti
the Correct your spelling
to
Sydney
the amount of sunshine in there is much higher in comparison with London
and New York
in more detail it’s just above 25 degrees
celsius
. During the next Capitalize word
Celsius
seasons
the amount of Add a comma
seasons,
sunlight
in Sydney
went down and dropped to about 15 degrees
in July, afterwards
started rising again. Correct word choice
and afterwards
While in
Correct word choice
In
London
and New York
the lines increased rapidly, the highest Add a comma
York,
temperature
in New York
surpassed 30 degrees
and the peak temperature
in London
is
just below 25 Wrong verb form
was
degrees
. And taking a closer look at the end
of the year it can be observed that temperature
of all Correct article usage
the temperature
tree
given cities almost reached the same level as Correct your spelling
the
in
the beginning of the year, in more detail, in New Change the preposition
at
York
- 5 degrees
, Sydney
- 25 degrees
and last
but not least London
- below 10 degrees
. And we
were Correct word choice
We
also
given a table with the sum of annual hours
of sunlight
in the same three countries. The largest number
is in New York
- 2535 hours
, the second biggest number
is in Sydney
- 2473 hours
, and the city which has been receiving the minimal hours
of sunshine is London
with the number
of 1180 hours
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, hours, sunlight, sydney, york, temperature, degrees, london with synonyms.
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