The bar chart below shows the hours per week that teenagers spend doing certain activities in Chester from 2002 to 2007.
The chart illustrates leisure activities that teenagers spend in Chester from 2002 to 2007
Overall
,it seems that through these years the most popular activity was watching television,however
,the most unpopular activity was bowling from 2002 to 2007.
First of all, going to public places such
as pubs and discos was popular in 2007 with 17 hours
per week
,whilst, in 2002 and 2003 this
type of activity had 7 and 10 hours
. Furthermore
, 2004,2005 and 2006 had the same hours
with approximately 13 hours
per week
,respectively. Watching television was the most enjoyable among teenagers,where 2002 and 2003 had the same amount of hours
25. However
, 2007,2006,2005 had approximately 38,36,35 hours
per week
respectively. Doing homework and doing sports looked the same in both of these years,in comparison in 2002 doing homework had 2 hours
,but in 2006 and 2007 doing homework had more hours
than sports 5 times more. In terms of Shopping, in 2006 and 2007 had 15 hours
per week
and in 2003 and 2004 had the same 12 hours
per week
respectively. Watching DVDs had incrementally increased from 2003 to 2004 and had 15 to 18 hours
per week
and decreased in 2005 to 17 hours
. Bowling was at the bottom through all this
time and was packed only in 2002 for 3 hours
per week
among teenagersSubmitted by batirka06 on
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