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The given bar chart shows the difference of the share of international students among university graduates in different Canadian cities between 2001 and 2006.‏

The given bar chart shows the difference of the share of international students among university graduates in different Canadian cities between 2001 and 2006.‏
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of foreign
students
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 among university graduates in several cities
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 Canada in 2001 and 2006.
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 it can be seen the amount of international
students
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 significantly
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 during the period. Another remarkable point is that New Brunswick was
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 in attracting these
students
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 in both years. The percentage of foreign
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 in New Brunswick,
Novea
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Nova
 Scotia and Quebec was approximately 6% in 2001. Though
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 rate increased to 12%,11% and 8% respectively in 2006. British
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 and Alberta
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 with 5% in 2001
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 by a growth to11% and about 7% for the first mentioned city and the latter in 2006.
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, Manitoba, Newfoundland and Labrador and Ontario only absorbed around 3%
international
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students
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 in 2001 which is the fewest amount in comparison with other cities and despite their growth to about 7% in 2006, are still on the bottom of the list.

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