The charts below show the proportion of the energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons with relevant.

The charts below show the proportion of the energy produced from different

sources in a country between 1985 and 2003

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make

comparisons with relevant.
The charts illustrate the fraction of
energy
which is produced from a variety of sources between the years 1985 and 2003 in one
country
comprising
oil
, nuclear,
hydrogen
, coal, natural gas and others.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the main resource in the
country
is
oil
and both
hydrogen
and other renewable generate
energy
the least.
To begin
with,
oil
in 1985 occupied well over 50% of
energy
production in the
country
and
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followed by nuclear and natural gas which registered 22% and 13% respectively. The
energy
in the
country
is produced by coal at 8%
while
hydrogen
and renewable resources were about 4% and 1% in 1985.
Additionally
, the
energy
that came from
oil
in the year 2003 decreased to 39%
as well as
nuclear which
also
declined by 5%.
On the contrary
, the proportion of natural gas and coal was shot up to 23% and 13%,
furthermore
, other renewable which rose by 3% in 2003. Only
hydrogen
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source remained the same percentage as in 1985.
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