The table shows the passenger and aircraft movements for last year at Singapore Changi Airport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows the passenger and aircraft movements for last year at Singapore Changi Airport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the
number
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of passengers and aircraft movements in the
last
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year
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and the fraction compared to the previous
year
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in Changi
Airport
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in Singapore.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the
number
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of
people
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using the
airport
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increases
while
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the
number
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of planes decreases from the
year
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before.
Moreover
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, Most
people
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use the
airport
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the most in December but the planes are used mostly in January.
To begin
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with, the traffic of passengers starts the
year
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with 4596764 before it fluctuates throughout the
year
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and ends with 5093465. The total
number
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of
people
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in the
last
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year
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is 54093070 which is 0.7% more than the previous
year
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. There is a decrease in
people
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who use the
airport
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in February, March, June, August, September, November and December compared to the previous.
Additionally
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, the aircraft movements in the
last
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year
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are highest in January, at 30353,
then
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they vary to 29711
at the end
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of the
year
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. The
overall
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usage of planes
also
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slightly fell by 0.7%,
furthermore
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, starting from June to December, the percentage of change in plane movements
drops
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dropped
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from the previous
year
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last, overall".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, year, airport, people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreases" was used 2 times.
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