The graph below gives information about the number of cases of diarrhea in Mashhad between 1983 and 1992. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The visual illustration gives information about how many people were infected with
diarrhea
in Mashhad over the period of 10 years from 1983.
Change the spelling
diarrhoea
Overall
, the number of patients fluctuated over the years and reached the highest figure in 1989.
In the first year
, there were 100 cases
of diarrhea
reported in Mashhad and Change the spelling
diarrhoea
this
quantity was relatively stable in the next 2 years. Afterward
, the Change the spelling
Afterwards
cases
increased moderately to roughly double in 1986 and 1987. However
, the upward trend did not last
since the figure suddenly dropped to the level of 100 cases
in the next year
. Following that, the last
year
of the ‘80 decade witnessed a swift rocket to the peak of the number of cases
by claiming approximately 400 cases
, which was four times more than the previous year
. 1990 came with a slight drop in the number of cases
and plateaued at just above 350 people a year
later until down to zero at the end
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