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The graph below gives information about the number of cases of diarrhea in Mashhad between 1983 and 1992. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the number of cases of diarrhea in Mashhad between 1983 and 1992. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The visual illustration gives information about how many people were infected with
diarrhea
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diarrhoea
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 in Mashhad over the period of 10 years from 1983.
Overall
, the number of patients fluctuated over the years and reached the highest figure in 1989. In the first
year
, there were 100
cases
 of
diarrhea
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diarrhoea
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 reported in Mashhad and
this
 quantity was relatively stable in the next 2 years.
Afterward
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, the
cases
 increased moderately to roughly double in 1986 and 1987.
However
, the upward trend did not
last
 since the figure suddenly dropped to the level of 100
cases
 in the next
year
. Following that, the
last
year
 of the ‘80 decade witnessed a swift rocket to the peak of the number of
cases
 by claiming approximately 400
cases
, which was four times more than the previous
year
. 1990 came with a slight drop in the number of
cases
 and plateaued at just above 350 people a
year
 later until down to zero
at the end
.
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