The bar graph below gives information about the average daily sales of different food items in two seasons.

The bar graph below gives information about the average daily sales of different food items in two seasons.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar graph below gives information about the average daily sales of different food items in two seasons.
The bar graph shows data about
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average daily consumption of five different food products by number of
portions
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in two seasons, namely
winter
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and summer
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it is clear from the graph that
demand
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demands
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for
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apply
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hot
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coffee
coffe
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coffee
and
soup
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the soup
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had
a
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an
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enormous climb in
cold
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the cold
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season,
while
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ice cream and iced-
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coffe
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coffee
were not
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preferred
preffered
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preferred
in
winter
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In
winter
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sales of soup and hot
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coffe
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coffee
saw a significant increase. Hot
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coffe
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coffee
was sold in 30 servings in
a
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the
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hot season,
whereas
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in
winter
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it had
a
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an
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enormous climb of around 45
portions
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, meanwhile soup. Was sold 25 times lower in comparison with hot
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coffee
coffe
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coffee
in summer it was an about 25
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sales of iced
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coffee
coffe
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coffee
experienced a sharp growth in
winter
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it was
an
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apply
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around 1 or 2
portions
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then
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increased to 40 at the same time ice cream selling registered a
moderet
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moderate
modest
rise from around 25 to about 35
portions
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consumption of salad
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remained
remaned
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remained
stable in all seasons

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Vocabulary: Replace the words portions, winter, coffe with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "climb" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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