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The diagram below explains the process o f making woodpellets, used to heat buildings. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below explains the process o f making woodpellets, used to heat buildings. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram displays the process of wooden
pellets
Fix the agreement mistake
pellet
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 production,
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that
Correct pronoun usage
which
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 is used to heat the accommodation.
Overall
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, even though the process seems to be easy, it includes the coordinated work of both machines and employees. It is divided into seven sections, from the sawdust up to
ready
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the ready
a ready
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 product.
Firstly
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, the sawdust is
being
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apply
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transported from
Correct article usage
the sawdrill
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sawdrill
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saw drill
saw-drill
 to the factory. There it is
being
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pressed by
an automated hammers
Correct the article-noun agreement
an automated hammer
automated hammers
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 into
long
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the long
a long
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fiber
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fibre
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. After that they are
being
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steamed and
forms
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form
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 pellets through the holes in
specialized
Correct article usage
a specialized
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 pellet machine.
Although
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 the wood is heat-tolerant, it needs some time to cool down. The leftovers and dust are being vacuumed so the working place
maintains
Verb problem
remains
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 tidy. Eventually, ready pellets are
being
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packed into certain bags (each of them can withstand up to 18 kilos or 40 pounds) and
then
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 it is sold to customers.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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