The two diagrams illustrate the main parts of a hot air balloon and indicate how it ascends and descends in flight.
The 2 graphs depict the different parts of a
balloon
and how it can ascend or descend during the flight.
Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
to make the Linking Words
balloon
ascend, the Use synonyms
gas
burners have to be on , in order to make the hot air go up in the Use synonyms
balloon
's Use synonyms
envelope
and the Use synonyms
valve
has to be closed, Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
gas
has to be off and the Use synonyms
valve
has to be opened to let go the hot air to make the Use synonyms
balloon
descend.
The Use synonyms
balloon
's ascent is made thanks to the Use synonyms
envelope
which ends with a Use synonyms
valve
, which has to be closed to make the Use synonyms
balloon
go up. Use synonyms
In addition
, the Linking Words
gas
tanks, which are inside the basket for passengers, have to be Use synonyms
open
in order to inflate the Wrong verb form
opened
balloon
's Use synonyms
envelope
.
In opposition, the ballon's descent can be made thanks to the opening of the Use synonyms
valve
situated on the top of the Use synonyms
envelope
. Use synonyms
Then
, the Linking Words
gas
tanks have to be closed and the burners off to stop the hot air making. Use synonyms
Additionally
, the Linking Words
valve
of the Use synonyms
balloon
has to be opened by the Use synonyms
valve
cord activated by the pilot .Use synonyms
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words balloon, gas, envelope, valve with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "go up" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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