The two diagrams illustrate the main parts of a hot air balloon and indicate how it ascends and descends in flight.
The 2 graphs depict the different parts of a
balloon
and how it can ascend or descend during the flight.
Overall
, it is clear that
to make the balloon
ascend, the gas
burners have to be on , in order to make the hot air go up in the balloon
's envelope
and the valve
has to be closed, while
the gas
has to be off and the valve
has to be opened to let go the hot air to make the balloon
descend.
The balloon
's ascent is made thanks to the envelope
which ends with a valve
, which has to be closed to make the balloon
go up. In addition
, the gas
tanks, which are inside the basket for passengers, have to be open
in order to inflate the Wrong verb form
opened
balloon
's envelope
.
In opposition, the ballon's descent can be made thanks to the opening of the valve
situated on the top of the envelope
. Then
, the gas
tanks have to be closed and the burners off to stop the hot air making. Additionally
, the valve
of the balloon
has to be opened by the valve
cord activated by the pilot .Submitted by leared on
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words balloon, gas, envelope, valve with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "go up" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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