The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about the consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.

The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about the consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.
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What has been depicted in the line graph is the consumption of energy in the United States in 1980,
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future projections for 2030.
Overall
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, throughout the whole time frame, petrol and oil had the highest portion among the other consumed energy,
whereas
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that of hydropower was the lowest. From 1990 to 2020, petrol and oil showed a rising trend, ranging from 35
quadrillion
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to 45
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, and it is estimated that it will increase 50
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at the end
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of the period.
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, at the beginning of the period, coal and natural gas followed an almost similar pattern, starting at 20 and 16 quadrillions respectively, and finishing at around 25 quadrillions in 2020.
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, it is predicted that the former will continue its trend, which is nearly 30
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,
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the latter will remain unchanged at 25
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. Over the given period, nuclear, solar/wind, and hydropower started at around 4
quadrillion
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, with nuclear at the top, followed by solar and wind at around 5
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in 2010. Both are projected to reach around 6 and 9
quadrillion
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by 2030 in order,
while
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hydropower experienced a slight drop and it is projected that it will fall below the initial values.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words quadrillion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Energy consumption
  • Renewable resources
  • Non-renewable resources
  • Fossil fuels
  • Nuclear power
  • Hydroelectric power
  • Solar energy
  • Wind energy
  • Biomass
  • Consumption patterns
  • Technological advancements
  • Energy efficiency
  • Sustainable development
  • Carbon footprint
  • Energy policy
  • Projections
  • Decade
  • Significant shifts
  • Economic factors
  • Environmental impact
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