The table shows price of a cup of coffee in six cities in Australia in 2010 and 2014. write an essay and summerize the details.

The table shows price of a cup of coffee in six cities in Australia in 2010 and 2014. 

write an essay and summerize the details.
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The table demonstrates the cost of a
cup
of coffee in
numorous
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numerous
cities in Australia in 2010 and 2014.
Overall
, the city of Melbourne had the highest rate of change
in
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at
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the time of the survey.
However
, Canberra and Adelaide
both
accounted
the
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for the
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lowest percentage of
price
alteration. In 2010, the most expensive
cup
of coffee was being sold in Perth
with
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at
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the
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a
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cost of 3.70
dollars
. In
constrast
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contrast
, the
price
of each
cup
in Sydney was 3.10
dollars
which was the minimum
price
. Other cities had all maintained their
price
number from 3.15 to 3.35
dollars
in the year 2010; with Brisbane and Canberra
both
standing at 3.35
dollars
.
Similarly
, Perth
accounts
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accounted
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for the highest number in 2014, at 3.95
dollars
a
cup
.
Although
Melbourne and Adelaide
both
share an equal cost for coffee, the
growth
of
price
in
Melbournce
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Melbourne
is much more immense, with a 9.5
percent
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per cent
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raise.
While
Sydney has the lowest
price
for
this
beverage, its level of
growth
, which is 8.1
percent
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per cent
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, is quite
noticable
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noticeable
. the city of
Cnberra
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Canberra
and Adelaide have
both
had a 4.5
percent
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per cent
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growth
each which is the lowest level of
growth
among all six cities.
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