The charts below give information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts
gives
information on Change the verb form
give
people
of different age-groups
that are contributing to the Correct your spelling
age groups
population
of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and also
projects
the Correct subject-verb agreement
project
population
growth for year
2050.
From the general Change the article
the year
trend
it can be seen that Add a comma
trend,
people
falling in age
group 15-59 will increase in Yemen and for Italy it will decrease by 16%.
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the age
Overall
, a significant decrease can be noticied
in Correct your spelling
noticed
notified
near
future in Yemen as Correct article usage
the near
people
that falls
in Change the verb form
fall
age
- group 0-14 dropped by 20 per Correct article usage
the age
cent
and on the contrary
, a noteworthy rise can be predicted in 50 years in teenagers-59 years while
population
growth of Correct article usage
the population
people
in their 60s is 3.6 per cent
in 2000 and 5.7 per cent
in 2050.
On the other
hand
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hand,
a
opposite trend can be seen in Correct article usage
the
population
growth of Italy as a significant increase in Correct article usage
the population
population
of Add an article
the population
eldery
Correct your spelling
elderly
people
can be predicted as it will double in 2050 reaching to
42.3 per Change preposition
apply
cent
which means that economic
burden will increase on Italy. In Correct article usage
the economic
italy
birth rates Change the capitalization
Italy
is
decreasing drastically as Change the verb form
are
for
the Change preposition
apply
prediction
it will declineReplace the word
predicted
4
per Change preposition
by 4
cent
and will reach 11.5 per cent
and
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apply
also
a decline in adolescent
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the adolescent
population
can be seen such
as it decreases by
more than 20 per Change preposition
of
cent
in predicted
50 years.
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the predicted
To conclude
, Italy needs to focus on their birth rates.Submitted by sananayyab91 on
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