The maps show the town of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Write a report of at least 150 words, summarizing the main features and making comparison where relevant.

The maps show the town of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Write a report of at least 150 words, summarizing the main features and making comparison where relevant.
The given maps present the changes that occurred in the
town
of Stokeford between 1930 and 2010.
Overall
, Stokeford increased significantly in size over the period with
house
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houses
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replacing areas that used to be farmland. Stokeford is situated on the east side of the River Stoke. In 1930, there was one main road going through the
town
from north to south. Along each side of the road were some
houses
, some shops, a post office, and
primary
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a primary
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school. By 2010, the post office still remained, but the shops had been replaced by more
houses
. There were
also
new roads built to connect the new
houses
to the main road.
Moreover
, the primary school had been enlarged and even more
houses
had been built to the west of the
town
in an area that was farmland in 1930. To the southeast of the
town
, there were some public gardens with a large house, but
this
was converted into a retirement home sometime over the period.
Finally
, the farmland that had been to the south of the
town
was
also
converted into a new housing area.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words town, houses with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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