Nowadays, many people prefer to rent a house rather than buying their house. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages
These days certain
people
prefer to buy a rented house
more than purchase their own house
. In this
essay, I will discuss the pros and cons
.
Nowadays a variety of people
do not like to spend time making a new house
or purchasing a house
because they say it is a waste of time. Therefore
, buying rent
a house
. it is the majority of people
are very easy. For instance
, my brother is a doctor his first occupation was as a Jaffna therefore
he has family who have to go there so they are buying rent
a house
in Jaffna. It is convenient for their occupation.
On the other hand
, it is more cons
. Buying a rented house
because, before buying rent
a house
people
needed to pay extra money for five months. Also
when they are it returns back to the house
with some damage to the property they have to pay extra money. For example
, This
way they have to change the address and children's schools. But it is temporary. Since renter houses more cons
society people
more than purchase house
.
In conclusion, the majority of people
buy rent
houses for there is occupation or they do not have enough time to make a house
or they have some financial problems. Therefore
it is more cons
to their lifestyle.Submitted by ma.ushamanu1024 on
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...