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Disposing of waste on streets has become a common problem in many countries these days. What are the cause and solutions of this issue?

#waste #streets #countries
In
this
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wastes
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waste
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are
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is
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 increasing
in
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apply
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all over the world
due to
 more population and not following the
rules
of
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for of
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 disposing the waste and it can
tackle
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 by various solutions. I will discuss causes and solutions in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin
 with, there are a plethora of reasons
which
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why
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people
 not
proper
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handling
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handle
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the
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their
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wastes
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waste
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. To explain, mass have not enough knowledge about the proper method of disposing.
For instance
,
due to
 unawareness,
poeple
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people
 don't understand that some of
waste
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the waste
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need
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 to
recycle
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be recycled
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 and they can use
in
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it in
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 their household activities.
In addition
,
beacuse
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because
 of less harsh
rules
,
people
 are neglecting to rid the
wastes
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waste
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.
On the other hand
,
by
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using some regulations by authority on
people
 can
be solve
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solve
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this
 issue. To elaborate,
Government
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the Government
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 should make strict
rules
due to
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apply
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which
people
 have to follow
those
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apply
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.
For example
, put imposing
penalities
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penalties
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 on offenders if they don't
dispose
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dispose of
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 the
wastes
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waste
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 in
accurate
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an accurate
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 method.
In addition
, there are some countries
who
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that
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 provide in return if
people
 dump the
wastes
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waste
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 properly.
For instance
, In
australia
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Australia
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, if
peolpe
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people
 separate the glass and plastics, they will get
peices
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pieces
 of bread or
discount
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a discount
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 on some things.
Thus
, using enhancing
method
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methods
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 and awareness among
people
 can sort out
this
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these
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peoblems
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problem
problems
. In conclusion,
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the authority
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authority
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authorities
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 should
setup
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set up
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 the
rules
 and organise some awareness programs and
people
 will definitely apply them to get some discounts to save their money as well.
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Lexical Resource
Try to avoid repetitive words and phrases to enhance the lexical resource. Instead of using 'people' and 'wastes' frequently, synonyms could enrich your text.
Grammatical Range
Work on sentence structure to make your arguments clearer and more persuasive. Varied sentence types and structures can improve readability and coherence.
Coherence and Cohesion
Enhance clarity by directly addressing the causes in one paragraph and solutions in another, ensuring each paragraph has a clear main idea and is developed with specific examples or further explanation.
Task Response
Your essay effectively addresses both parts of the prompt: causes and solutions to the waste disposal problem.
Coherence and Cohesion
The introduction and conclusion frame your arguments well, providing a clear structure to your essay.

Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.

You essay structure should look something like this:

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – Problems
  • Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • One of the first problems of the...
  • Another problem that needs to be considered...
  • A possible solution to this problem would be...
  • One immediate practical solution is to...

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inadequate provision
  • waste bins
  • public areas
  • accumulation
  • public awareness
  • environmental and health implications
  • strict regulations
  • penalties
  • littering
  • infrastructure
  • regular waste collection
  • public education campaigns
  • responsible waste management
  • implementing stricter penalties
  • community service
  • adherence
  • compliance
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