The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.
The diagrams illustrate the dramatic changes to the public
library
over the
last
two decades for its advancement.
Overall
, the
library
is divided into two sections and the major changes have happened to both sides of the
library
.
Additionally
, the middle part of the
library
is kept clear and enlarged. As the first plan reveals, the middle part of the
library
was relatively small and comprised some chairs and tables facing the
entrance
. The enquiry desk that included tickets and book returns was at the right
corner
of the
entrance
,
whereas
the reading
room
was at the left side of the
entrance
. The
adult
non-fiction
books
corner
was at the right of the seating area, just next to the children’s
books
corner
.
On the other hand
, the
adult
fiction
books
corner
was at the left of the seating area next to the game zone. At present, the seating area is demolished. A computer
room
and a cafe have been introduced
instead
of the reading
room
and the enquiry desk at the
entrance
of the
library
. All reference
books
are kept in the left side
library
and
adult
fiction
books
, an information desk and self-service machines are provided to the right, where
adult
non-fiction
books
were
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kept. A Lecture
room
has been installed
instead
of the children’s
books
corner
and some sofas, the children’s fiction
books
and storytelling events to the left of the
library
have been built.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, entrance, corner, room, adult, books with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • layout
  • shelving
  • reading area
  • reference section
  • encyclopedias
  • dictionaries
  • circulation desk
  • transactions
  • digital media
  • computer stations
  • multimedia rooms
  • café area
  • social environment
  • leisure-friendly
  • expanded reading areas
  • user experience
  • comfortable seating
  • children's section
  • engage younger readers
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