The chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales (in various formats) of films from a particular store between 2002 and 2011.
The given charts predict different formats of film both rentals and
sales
reported in 2002 and 2011.
It is immediately noticeable that the sales
of DVDs and rentals went to
the opposite directions of growth; rentals and VHS Change preposition
in
were
dropped Unnecessary verb
apply
while
the sales
of DVD
Fix the agreement mistake
DVDs
were
grewUnnecessary verb
apply
up
. The VHS were; Change preposition
apply
however
, got very few sales
, and Blu-ray had the least sales
among all.
Renting films was the most popular 2002
with almost 180,000 copies Change preposition
in 2002
were
borrowed; Unnecessary verb
apply
however
, since then
, the number had
declined gradually until hit Wrong verb form
has
its
rock bottom in 2011 with just over 50,000 rental copies. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Similar
pattern of VHS in 2002, its amount of Add an article
A similar
sales
was the second to most which is
about 80,000 Change the verb form
are
sales
; however
, it decreased until it reached 10,000 sales
in 2005 and completely gone in 2006.
DVD sales
started from around 40,000 companies but surged up to its
peak in 2007 with 210,000 Correct pronoun usage
their
sales
and plateau
since Wrong verb form
plateaued
then
. Lastly
, the least among all is Blu-ray sales
which started to growth
in 2007 with less than 10,000 Replace the word
grow
sales
, then
slightly rose and ended the 2011 with just over 10,000 sales
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