The map shows the development of the village of Rye mouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The map shows the development of the village of Rye mouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The presented map graphs depict the comparison between the small town of Rye when it was built in 1995 and the same place nowadays. There was considerable enhancement of the settlement over these years, and it was gradually transformed from a rural village into a largely residential area. In the present, the most noticeable development is the presence of apartments on the beach area that
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a fish market and fishing port back in 1995. The new sports facilities,
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as a tennis court and a golf park, have been built to the north of the sectors that were farmland and a forest park in the 1990s. In response to the rise in population, housing was growing to around double the total of the previous year. The shop spots on the main road that can be seen to the south of the city in 1995, no longer exist, having been replaced recently by the restaurant. The small cafe is still open near the port,
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to the old yet charming hotel, which has many guests in the summer. The empty field in the corner of the avenue was transformed into a public parking lot to facilitate tourists during the peak season.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: The word "presented" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • development
  • transformation
  • residential areas
  • infrastructure
  • connectivity
  • commercial development
  • public services
  • green spaces
  • recreational areas
  • economic growth
  • lifestyle changes
  • quality of life
  • sustainability
  • layout
  • connectivity
  • impact
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