The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to Scotland who visited four different attractions from 1980 to 2010

The line graph illustrates the information about the number of

visiters

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who have been

four

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in four

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different activities between 1980 to 2010 in Scotland. In general, what stands out from the graph is that

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and zoo experienced an upward trend.

While

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festival

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festivals

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and

aquarium

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aquariums

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witnessed a downward trend. The data clearly shows that

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was the lowest among

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the four

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attractions in 1980. It constantly changed between 1980-2000.

Then

it saw a rapid decline throughout the period from 2000-2010.

Finally

, it reached 20%.

Moreover

,

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was nearly 23% in 1980. It increased sharply from 20% to around 43% for 15 years. It dropped suddenly and finished at almost 32

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On the other hand

,

festival

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the festival

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was 30% at the beginning of the process. During the period between 1980-2010, it gradually declined and dropped

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around 18 percent in 2010. Meanwhile, aquarim

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fluctuated

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from 1980 to 1990.

Finally

, it decreased slightly to 10%

at the end

of the period.