The graph below shows the percentage of New Zealand primary school students learning a second language by language learned for the years 2006 to 2014.
The predicted costings over the next five years in American dollars for three environmental
projects
for sustainable forestry are illustrated in the given table. The pie chart gives information about the expected expenditure breakdown allocation for the first year
as the project are
set up.
Correct subject-verb agreement
is
Overall
, it is projected that spendings
on two of three Fix the agreement mistake
spending
projects
are
going to decrease, Correct subject-verb agreement
is
as well as
half of expenditure
will go Add an article
the expenditure
for
salaries.
It is planned for the next Change preposition
to
year
for West Africa, Central America and South-east
Asia Correct your spelling
Southeast
projects
to cost 10.5, 20 and 30 millions
respectively. From the pie Change to singular
million
chart
Add a comma
chart,
it is clear that
salaries and set-up costs will make half
and Change preposition
up half
third
of Correct article usage
a third
planned
costs, Correct article usage
the planned
whereas
office expenses and trainings
will share the remaining Change the wording
training
pieces of training
costings
. Following, by the second Replace the word
costs
year
costings will have decreased and it will become a trend, which eventually going to cause for
West Africa and Central America Change preposition
apply
projects
to outlay third and quarter of initial expenses accordingly
. By contrast
, by the fifth year
South-east
Asia project’s expected Correct your spelling
Southeast
costing
will be 50 million dollars.Replace the word
cost
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