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The graph below shows the percentage of New Zealand primary school students learning a second language by language learned for the years 2006 to 2014.

The graph below shows the percentage of New Zealand primary school students learning a second language by language learned for the years 2006 to 2014.
The provided graph gives information about the number of
percentage
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 primary school
students
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 from New Zealand learning
second
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a second
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 language over a seven-year
period
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 between 2006 and 2014.
Overall
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, it is obviously seen that
the
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 analyzed
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 the
percentage
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 of learners in
Japanes
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Japanese
 and German
was
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slight decrease
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slightly decreased
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,
whereas
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Chinese
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 language increased significantly. Getting back to the details at the beginning of the year
percentage
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 of
students
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, who chose in
Chinese
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 language was approximately less than 5%,
then
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 by 2014 the figure increased considerably
reached
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 a peak at 15%,
on the contrary
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,the number of
students
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 who learned German and Japanese dropped slightly and by the end of the
year
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 the percentages were roughly 4% and 17% respectively.
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,the
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 of
students
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 who learned languages ​​
such
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 as Spanish, French and other languages ​​fluctuated slightly. During the analyzed
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, the highest
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 of
students
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 was French, and the lowest was Chinese. At the beginning and end of the analyzed
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, the
percentage
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 of French was about 30%.
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, the
percentage
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 of Spanish and other languages ​​did not change and was the same throughout the
period
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, students, period with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 8 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 3 times.
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