The graph below shows the percentage of New Zealand primary school students learning a second language by language learned for the years 2006 to 2014.

The graph below shows the percentage of New Zealand primary school students learning a second language by language learned for the years 2006 to 2014.
The predicted costings over the next five years in American dollars for three environmental
projects
for sustainable forestry are illustrated in the given table. The pie chart gives information about the expected expenditure breakdown allocation for the first
year
as the project
are
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set up.
Overall
, it is projected that
spendings
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spending
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on two of three
projects
are
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is
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going to decrease,
as well as
half of
expenditure
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the expenditure
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will go
for
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to
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salaries. It is planned for the next
year
for West Africa, Central America and
South-east
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Southeast
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Asia
projects
to cost 10.5, 20 and 30
millions
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respectively. From the pie
chart
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it is clear that
salaries and set-up costs will make
half
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up half
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and
third
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a third
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of
planned
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the planned
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costs,
whereas
office expenses and
trainings
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training
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will share the remaining
costings
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. Following, by the second
year
costings will have decreased and it will become a trend, which eventually going to cause
for
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West Africa and Central America
projects
to outlay third and quarter of initial expenses
accordingly
.
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, by the fifth
year
South-east
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Southeast
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Asia project’s expected
costing
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will be 50 million dollars.
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