The graph below shows the percentage of New Zealand primary school students learning a second language by language learned for the years 2006 to 2014.
The given picture illustrates the data of New Zealand beginner school children studying foreign tongue by tongue learned for the years 2006 to 2014.
Overall
, we can clarify that French and Spanish languages are the most notorious among others, also
they shows
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show
well
results during 8 years. Change the adverb
good
While
,
Chinese and German Remove the comma
apply
not
useful in Add a missing verb
are not
opinion
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the opinion
children
.
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of children
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, we aware
that among second languages less important from 4 to 10 per cent Add a missing verb
are aware
during
2006 and 2013 was Chinese. Change preposition
between
Although
, in 2014 year increased significantly to 13 Correct word choice
However
percentage
and Replace the word
per cent
take
Wrong verb form
took
a
fourth place in the TOP. Correct article usage
apply
Subsequently
, we should remark Japanese tongue that
was famous in 2006 with 28% , Correct pronoun usage
apply
then
fell slightly in the following years. Likewise
, other languages give only unsuccessful numbers from 6% to 9% between 2006 and 2014.Submitted by dnm.best on
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