The graph below shows the percentage of New Zealand primary school students learning a second language by language learned for the years 2006 to 2014.
The provided graph gives information about the number of
percentage
primary school Use synonyms
students
from New Zealand learning Use synonyms
second
language over a seven-year Add an article
a second
period
between 2006 and 2014.
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, it is obviously seen that Linking Words
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during the
period
the Use synonyms
percentage
of learners in Use synonyms
Japanes
and German Correct your spelling
Japanese
was
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slight decrease
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slightly decreased
whereas
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Chinese
language increased significantly.
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the Chinese
percentage
of Use synonyms
students
, who chose in Use synonyms
Chinese
language was approximately less than 5%, Change the article
the Chinese
then
by 2014 the figure increased considerably Linking Words
reached
a peak at 15%, Correct word choice
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on the contrary
,the number of Linking Words
students
who learned German and Japanese dropped slightly and by the end of the Use synonyms
year
the percentages were roughly 4% and 17% respectively. Add a comma
year,
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,the Linking Words
percentage
of Use synonyms
students
who learned languages Use synonyms
such
as Spanish, French and other languages fluctuated slightly. During the analyzed Linking Words
period
, the highest Use synonyms
percentage
of Use synonyms
students
was French, and the lowest was Chinese. At the beginning and end of the analyzed Use synonyms
period
, the Use synonyms
percentage
of French was about 30%. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the Linking Words
percentage
of Spanish and other languages did not change and was the same throughout the Use synonyms
period
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