In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

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the historical value of a building or maybe to make sure there is no bad
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that may trigger bad influence in the future.
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about their
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, they can search the data on the internet and ask the
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or the salesman about it.
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in some regions may consider many things before deciding to purchase a new house or a new building. One of the reasons is to check that there is no bad
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of the property, especially a house that
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for a family to live. Most of them
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to have no criminal
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. Some of them think
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may pay attention to the historical
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of a building. Some of them find the
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story really
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valuable
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, a complex in Semarang that become a tourist attraction has a lot of
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that have rich historical value
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their stories when the colonial era. To gain
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the
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,
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can do research on their
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. Mostly, the
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which have unique
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background
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history
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of of it will appear on a website that
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the
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of the building. Another
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attempt
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resources is
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asking the surrounding
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who lived near the area or asking the staff who sell the building. There
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possibilities to gain
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from them, especially the salesman since their job is to promote the building,
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the knowledge of the building's
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is an essential thing they should have.
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website of
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a property
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company has a particular part of the web which contains additional
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of
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the
buildings
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for their customers to know the
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.
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similar website is used by
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company named Borneo Star Property in East Kalimantan. In conclusion, the rising number of
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who
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in the
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stories of their
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the
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of a building and some of them may
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that there is no bad
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on their
properties
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, especially family houses.
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can help them to answer their curiosity or they can ask the
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from
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neigbors
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neighbours
and the promoter of the
buildings
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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