Some people think that cars should be banned from city centers to reduce pollution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The fact is undeniable that private means of transportation like

cars

made human lives much easier than before.

However

,Some people have an opinion that personal automobiles

shoud

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should

be

restructed

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restricted

from

urban

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environment as they pollute

air

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.

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essay will discuss my opinion

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the statement and describe the ups

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downs

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the notion.

Urbans

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Urban

areas are more polluted as compared to rural areas and the main reason behind

this

is

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the use

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of excessive

automobile

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.

In other words

, banning

cars

from cities will contribute to less air and noise pollution.

Consequently

, citizens will get to live in

healthier

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environment which automatically

reduce

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spending on health facilities.

Secondly

, it will promote non-motorized means of transportation like walking and cycling.

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, most

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the individuals prefer driving even for the walking distance , which in turn leads to less physical activity and obesity.

Therefore

,

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of vehicles will not only reduce traffic congestion but

also

promote

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lifestyle. Despite the benefits, there are negative consequences to the local economy.

This

could negatively impact car businesses which affects sales and employment opportunities. Residents and visitors

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who

often rely on

cars

for mobility especially

employess

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employees

who travel

to

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long

distance

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for their jobs have to suffer inconvenience.

Although

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private vehicles cause pollution to the cities, benefits cannot be overlooked. I believe

cars

shouldn't be banned

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properly, government should encourage other alternatives like carpooling or

resuce

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reduce

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it to certain areas.