The pie charts below show how teenagers in Japan and Australia spent their money in 2019.
The chart depicts the young
children
expenditure in various countries in 2019.
Change noun form
children's
Overall
, it is clearly apparent that most of spending
by Australian and Add an article
the spending
Japan
teens Replace the word
Japanese
in
video/computer and Change preposition
on
cloths
, Correct your spelling
clothes
on the other hand
, the most
lowest spending Change the adjective
apply
has
done in Verb problem
is
few
categories like books and Correct article usage
a few
other
.
Fix the agreement mistake
others
To begin
with, in Australia and Japan young teens has
Correct subject-verb agreement
have
highest
proportion of expenses Change the article
the highest
in
Video and ComputerChange preposition
for
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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