The diagram below shows how orange juice is produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The representation illustrates the production of orange juices from when they are harvested and delivered to the factory to when they are sold at stores.
Overall
, it can be seen that it does not take a lot of time to make fresh packages, producing processed juice, Linking Words
on the other hand
, takes 11 steps with complicated machines.
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To begin
with, fresh oranges are delivered to the factory where their very first step is to be washed carefully to remove excess dirt. Linking Words
Next,
the extraction process turns the oranges into two outputs, solid waste and fresh extracted water. Linking Words
While
the paste can be utilized to feed on animals, the extract is Linking Words
then
packaged and distributed to stores or continues to the next process.
To make industrialized drinks, workers will deliver fresh fluid from the Linking Words
last
production in refrigerator trucks to the evaporation machine where water is evaporated from orange juice. The result is concentrated liquid with is contained in cans and delivered to a warehouse. Linking Words
Subsequently
, these cans are combined with water in a factory and are ready for sale. Linking Words
Finally
, the processed drinks are packaged and sold at the shop.Linking Words
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