A friend of your is thinking of going om a camping holiday for the first time this summer . he has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter -Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday. -Describe some possible disadvantages. -Say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer.
Dear friend,
I am writing to you
this
letter in order to provide you with some useful advice I have learned from my previous experience in camping since I heard from our friend Ali that you are planning to go to a campaign this
summer.
I am pretty sure that you will never forget this
enjoyable experience, as you will move from your daily routine activities to a new self-independent lifestyle. Besides
that, you can not imagine the level of happiness you will reach when you wake up early morning on
spectacular natural sceneries and breathe fresh air or drink pure water. Change preposition
in
However
, let me remind you of some essential items you should bring like wet wipes, a torch, a battery bank, a GPS device, insecticide, and last
but not least the portable toilet.
The only disadvantage that needs to be taken into account is that you will be exposed to a high level of risk if you don’t take care of yourself.
Unfortunately, due to
my earlier commitment to my family, I will not be able to join you on this
wonderful journey, I wish you all the best and to return safely to your family as well.
Truly yours,Submitted by maowda1982 on
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task response
Consider elaborating more on why your friend would enjoy camping, providing specific examples or personal anecdotes to strengthen your argument.
coherence and cohesion
Use a range of cohesive devices (e.g., linking words, pronouns) more effectively to ensure smoother transitions between ideas.
greeting and closing
Your greeting and closing are appropriate and set a friendly tone for the letter.
complete response
You addressed all parts of the task, providing advice, potential disadvantages, and a personal stance regarding joining your friend.
suitable writing tone
The letter maintains an appropriate and friendly tone throughout, suitable for writing to a friend.