The bar chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly salary
The bar chart illustrates the amount of
one week
family expenditures in eight categories between 1968 and 2018.
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one-week
Overall
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it is clear that
families mostly spend their money on food in the past. Linking Words
However
, in the recent year, they tend to share it with other three types comprising leisure, housing and transport.
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To begin
with, in the year 1968, people spent their salary on food the most, at 35%. Housing and Dress had the same percentage which represented 10% of their income. Families in 1968 spent their money on travelling, personal property and household property almost the same amount which was about 8%. Linking Words
Moreover
, fuel and power were unnecessary at that time and came in Linking Words
last
place with 6%.
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Additionally
, Leisure occupied approximately 22% in 2018 followed by 19% of housing. Both of them surpassed food which registered 17% and dropped to third place. Linking Words
Furthermore
, transport had 14% and came in fourth place, Linking Words
as well as
, the use of goods in households remained the same at 8%. The fraction of others including Linking Words
clothing&footware
, individual goods and fuel was under 5%.Correct your spelling
clothing
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