The bar chart gives information about the number of overseas Japanese tourists between 1985 and 1995, and the line graph illustrates percentage of those going to Australia between 1984 and 1994.
The bar chart provides data regarding the
number
of overseas Japanese
tourists in 1985 and 1995, and the line graph presents information about the proportion of those going to Australia between 1984 and 1994.
Overall
, what stands out from the bar chart relates to the line graph, the number
and percentage of 2 graphs in 1984 and 1985 increased dramatically in 1994 and 1995.
The number
of foreign Japanese
tourists in 1985 rose moderately from 4 million
to just over 10 million
in 1990 after that in 1991 decreased normally. Moreover
, the figure in 1992 grew significantly from just under 12 million
to around 16 million
in 1995, it was the highest in this
period.
In addition
, the percentage of Japanese
tourists who have been to Australia showed a dramatic increase from 2% in 1984 to 5% in 1988 after that it dropped slightly to 4% in 1989. However
, the number
of Japanese
travelers
was a moderate increase from 5 per cent in 1990 to just over 6 per cent in 1993. It is the peak of Change the spelling
travellers
this
graph as well as
in 1994.Submitted by name79sinlapa on
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