The bar chart gives information about the number of overseas Japanese tourists between 1985 and 1995, and the line graph illustrates percentage of those going to Australia between 1984 and 1994.
The bar chart provides data regarding the
number
of overseas Use synonyms
Japanese
tourists in 1985 and 1995, and the line graph presents information about the proportion of those going to Australia between 1984 and 1994.
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Overall
, what stands out from the bar chart relates to the line graph, the Linking Words
number
and percentage of 2 graphs in 1984 and 1985 increased dramatically in 1994 and 1995.
The Use synonyms
number
of foreign Use synonyms
Japanese
tourists in 1985 rose moderately from 4 Use synonyms
million
to just over 10 Use synonyms
million
in 1990 after that in 1991 decreased normally. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the figure in 1992 grew significantly from just under 12 Linking Words
million
to around 16 Use synonyms
million
in 1995, it was the highest in Use synonyms
this
period.
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In addition
, the percentage of Linking Words
Japanese
tourists who have been to Australia showed a dramatic increase from 2% in 1984 to 5% in 1988 after that it dropped slightly to 4% in 1989. Use synonyms
However
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
Japanese
Use synonyms
travelers
was a moderate increase from 5 per cent in 1990 to just over 6 per cent in 1993. It is the peak of Change the spelling
travellers
this
graph Linking Words
as well as
in 1994.Linking Words
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