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The table below gives information about the three countries wit the highest populations. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about the three countries wit the highest populations. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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 the
informations
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 about the
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largest
population
 of ten countries in the world. It
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clearly shows that China was the biggest country with the highest
population
 of 1439
millions
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 in 2019,
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 by India which
conducted
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 1380
millions
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of
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people, and the third place is
USA
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the USA
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by having
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 331
millions
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of
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people living in the country.
while
 in the prediction of the year 2100, India climbed to be the top, with the largest
population
 of 1551
millions
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, and China
droped
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dropped
 to be the second with only 941
millions
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million
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of
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citizens. Surprisingly, Nigeria
raise up
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 dramatically from the 7th place of 206
millions
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million
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of
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to the
third
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3rd
 place of 730
millions
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million
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, which was almost a
trible
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triple
terrible
 higher than that in 2009. It is
preditable
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predictable
 that the citizens in Asia will be the majority
population
 in the world with the high birth rate and integers moving towards these regions.
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