The graph below shows the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.
The line chart illustrates how many
times
Australian teenagers ate three different types of fast food including pizza
, fish
and chips
and hamburgers
between 1975 and 2000.
Overall
, it is clear that
the consumption
of hamburgers
and pizza
increased considerably, whereas
the figure for fish
and chips
decreased over the period given.
In 1975, fish
and chips
were the most popular fast food consumed by Australian teenagers, with 100 times
, while
much less pizza
and hamburgers
were eaten in similar quantities (just less than 20 times
).
However
, during this
25-year period, the consumption
of fish
and chips
experienced a downward trend, falling dramatically to under 40 times
, although
it rose between 1980 and 1985. On the other hand
, the consumption
of hamburgers
showed an upward trend, overtaking that of fish
and chips
in 1986. By 2000 it had risen significantly to more than 100 times
. Also
, the consumption
of pizza
saw a rising tendency, and it exceeded that of fish
and chips
in 1993 before growing to over 80 times
. Finally
, it remained unchanged in the last
5 years.Submitted by 13394712150 on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words times, pizza, fish, chips, hamburgers, consumption with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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