The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selcting and reporting the main features.
The line chart illustrates the annual
carbon
dioxide
pollution
per person from 1967 to 2007 in the United Kingdom
, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal.
It is noticeable that the emissions in the UK have higher pollution
than other countries. By contrast
, the number of pollution
in Portugal has lower emissions but the amount of pollution
increased year
by year
.
In 1967, the United Kingdom
had the highest pollution
which was approximately 11 metric tonnes
of carbon
dioxide
but the amount of pollution
in the United Kingdom
slightly decreased year
by year
, which
was approximately 10.7 metric Correct pronoun usage
apply
tonnes
in the first decade, 10 metric tonnes
in the second decade, 9 metric tonnes
in 1997, and 8.5 metric tonnes
in 2007, which were the highest of pollutions. Moreover
, the range between Sweden and the United Kingdom
fluctuated year
by year
, which was approximately 2 metric tonnes
in 1967, 0.5 metric tonnes
in 1977 and 3 metric tonnes
in 1987. Furthermore
, the gap between Sweden and the United Kingdom
from 1997 to 2007 steadily decreased, which was approximately 3 metric tonnes
.
In terms of the average of carbon
dioxide
, Italy sharply increased, with was starting point Change preposition
of
at
4.2 metric Change preposition
of
tonnes
in 1967, 6.2 metric tonnes
in 1977, 6.5 metric tonnes
in 1987, and close to 8 metric tonnes
from 1997 to 2007, Correct word choice
when
which
the amount was stable. Correct word choice
when
Then
, the number of pollution
in Portugal rose year
by year
. In addition
, the range of carbon
dioxide
between Portugal and Italy was steady at 2 metric tonnes
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Vocabulary: Replace the words carbon, dioxide, pollution, kingdom, year, tonnes with synonyms.
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