Nowadays it is observed that
extensionCorrect article usage
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of new
technologies
business
is constantly increasing over current years, and it is arguable that
livesCorrect article usage
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of customers
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influenced and undergone some
changes
because of
technology
and its
business
. It seems to me that
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this
much
of Change preposition
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excessive
interestsFix the agreement mistake
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in new
technologies
,
people
’s
lives
have changed enormously. I will explain about
changes
that
causedAdd a missing verb
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by
technology
with some examples in
this
essay.
To start with, it appears that by
advancementAdd an article
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of
technology
and
extensionCorrect article usage
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of its
business
the
lives
of users
isCorrect subject-verb agreement
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impressed and transformed
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a different way not as it was before. in previous era before
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,
people
used to hang out with each other and there
wereCorrect subject-verb agreement
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more humanity and devotion running between them, but for
this
all has left is about exploring and browsing among new
technologies
and
it seems that
peoplesFix the agreement mistake
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now are more enthusiastic in unreal things
such
as robots, AI, computers and other related subjects.
Furthermore
, it seems that because of the development of
technologies
and
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business
in broader fields, the need for human
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has decreased.
ByChange preposition
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this
both in
technology
and
its Correct pronoun usage
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business
which has become
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all over the World, employment of
people
in some jobs
areCorrect subject-verb agreement
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surprisingly less
thatCorrect word choice
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before and it has made a huge alternation in life
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,
for example
, because of the translation ability in new
technologies
, translator’s expertness is useless now and there is no need for them.
Although
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it is true that a part of
populationAdd an article
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doesn’t have any interest in using
this
technology
and
preferCorrect subject-verb agreement
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to live without
themCorrect pronoun usage
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despite
of Change preposition
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this
group, the majority of
people
are considered
as Change preposition
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technology
users and their
lives
are dependent
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it, so they have all had
changes
in their life compared to no
technology
era.
To conclude
, for most
of Change preposition
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the Correct article usage
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people
, it is necessary to use
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new
technology
because all of their interests and interactions are related to it, so it was calculable that by
this
advancement of
technology
and its
business
of buying and selling, some activities would have some
changes
by time.