The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.
The figures illustrate the
amount
of money that was assigned to
police
in the UK
as well as
the source of its coming and how it was spent in 2 years between 2017 and 2018.
Overall
, it can be seen that a significant share of
this
money was related to the wages of
police
officers and staff and the National government was playing a huge role in the UK's
police
budget. On the one hand, in 2017 the
amount
of budget that was assigned to the
police
department came from the national government 175.5
million
dollars
which was the highest
amount
in comparison to another source of income and 304.7
million
dollars
in total, three-quarters of
this
budget was spent for the wages in 2017.
On the other hand
, in 2018
although
the total
amount
of the local tax income experienced about a 10% increase, from 91
million
to 102
million
dollars
, the total
amount
of income was increased by about 14
million
dollars
in total. Since the share of the buildings and transport section did not change from 2017, with only 17% in total, the
amount
of
this
expenditure on technology was about doubled and reached 14%.
Also
, the Salaries experienced a one-twenty
decreased
Replace the word
decrease
show examples
in total.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, police, million, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • budget allocation
  • funding sources
  • government policies
  • economic conditions
  • community services
  • crime prevention
  • public safety
  • significant increase/decrease
  • distribution
  • assessment
  • reflection
  • allocation shifts
  • budget comparison
  • impact analysis
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