The map below shows three proposed sites for a new supermarket (A, B and c) in the city of Ellington. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows three proposed sites for a new supermarket (A, B and c) in the city of Ellington. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Given is a map illustrating the transformation of new supermarkets in proposed three different areas in Ellington.
Overall
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, the location of A is expected to be surrounded by dwelling sites where not only close to the traffic-free zone but
also
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the park. B will be constructed in a remote area.
As well as
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that,
C
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will be added between residential and industrial zones. Looking into detail, for a
city
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with a population of 120,000, it is natural to construct three new department stores. A shopping mall will be located in heart of the Ellington
City
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and close to the railway which connects Hampfrod
City
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to the northeast of the map and
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passes through Supermarket
C
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in the south. Department store
C
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is anticipated to welcome more industrial workers than residents.
On the other hand
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, B will be built in the northwest of the
city
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and only the motorway can reach
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the store. It is predicted that regional customers will find it closer than the other two malls.
In addition
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, the airport is located in the southeast of the town and in the middle of the supermarket A and
C
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.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words c, city with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proposed sites
  • supermarket
  • locations
  • central
  • outskirts
  • residential areas
  • transport hubs
  • proximity
  • major roads
  • landmarks
  • accessibility
  • competition
  • shopping district
  • industrial area
  • green spaces
  • logistic ease
  • isolated
  • densely populated
  • traffic
  • customer reach
  • expansion possibilities
  • accessibility
  • customer base
  • logistical convenience
  • recommend
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