The map below shows three proposed sites for a new supermarket (A, B and c) in the city of Ellington. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

The map below shows three proposed sites for a new supermarket (A, B and c) in the city of Ellington. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words
Given is a map illustrating the transformation of new supermarkets in proposed three different areas in Ellington.
Overall
, the location of A is expected to be surrounded by dwelling sites where not only close to the traffic-free zone but
also
the park. B will be constructed in a remote area.
As well as
that,
C
will be added between residential and industrial zones. Looking into detail, for a
city
with a population of 120,000, it is natural to construct three new department stores. A shopping mall will be located in heart of the Ellington
City
and close to the railway which connects Hampfrod
City
to the northeast of the map and
then
passes through Supermarket
C
in the south. Department store
C
is anticipated to welcome more industrial workers than residents.
On the other hand
, B will be built in the northwest of the
city
and only the motorway can reach
to
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the store. It is predicted that regional customers will find it closer than the other two malls.
In addition
, the airport is located in the southeast of the town and in the middle of the supermarket A and
C
.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words c, city with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proposed sites
  • supermarket
  • locations
  • central
  • outskirts
  • residential areas
  • transport hubs
  • proximity
  • major roads
  • landmarks
  • accessibility
  • competition
  • shopping district
  • industrial area
  • green spaces
  • logistic ease
  • isolated
  • densely populated
  • traffic
  • customer reach
  • expansion possibilities
  • accessibility
  • customer base
  • logistical convenience
  • recommend
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