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that online
payment
will be more used than paper
money
in the future and other
people
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still
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uses. In my opinion, paying on
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will be more beneficial and essential because digital media
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up in
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time.
I
also
believe that there will be some
people
who strongly suggest
payment
with physical
money
because of the security problems.
To begin
with, living in a technology world has a
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significant impact on
people
.It can be seen that nowadays
people
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online options often because of the variety
for example
they consider online
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rather than
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.
Moreover
, there are many
people
who
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withChange preposition
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online shopping
withChange preposition
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this
reason they tend to pay online.
Despite
this
digital
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, some of them will
be insistChange the verb form
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to Change preposition
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use
paper
money
. One of the vital
exampleChange to a plural noun
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can be security problems. With advancing technology,
people
will
be concernChange the verb form
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more
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privacy because there are many programs which
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confidentiality
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for instance
sharing our passwords and personal information may be some examples
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forChange preposition
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this
problem.
Consequently
,
this
issue can
be breakChange the verb form
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trust and
endsCorrect subject-verb agreement
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up with serious damage to our lives in the future.
In conclusion, there are many advantages to
useWrong verb form
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digital
payment
also
it can
be provideChange the verb form
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faster and easier
payment
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. In comparison, lack of privacy and security issues can
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lead to
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physicalChange preposition
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money
in the coming years.