The table below gives information about the three countries wit the highest populations. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about the three countries wit the highest populations. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the
population
in ten
region
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.
Overall
,
China
and
India
had the greatest state
community
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communities
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in North America and South America
such
as Mexico and Brazil have the lowest. In 2019,
China
and
India
had over 1
million
population
which was 1,439
million
and 1,380
million
respectively.
USA
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was
ranging on
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the
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third with 331
million
which was less than 4
time
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, compared to
India
. Indonesia, Pakistan, Brazil and Nigeria approximately 206 - 274
million
. The
countries
with the least
population
,
such
as Bangladesh, Russia and Mexico, had less than 100
million
. Compared to the 2100 projection,
India
will override
China
and become the most populated country in those ten top
countries
, which had 1,551
million
. At the same time, the
population
of Nigeria increased sharply from 206
million
to 730
million
. The
population
of
China
and the USA fell significantly to 941
million
and 478
million
respectively.
While
the range of Indonesia decreased steeply its
population
increased from 274
million
to 292
million
. The
population
of Brazil dropped sharply from 213
million
to 177
million
. The range and
population
of Pakistan remain unchanged. Some new
countries
,
such
as D.R. Congo, Ethiopia and Tanzania will become the ten highest
population
countries
.
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