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The table below gives information about the three countries wit the highest populations. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about the three countries wit the highest populations. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the
population
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 in ten
region
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regions
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.
Overall
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,
China
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 and
India
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 had the greatest state
community
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communities
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 in North America and South America
such
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 as Mexico and Brazil have the lowest. In 2019,
China
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 and
India
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 had over 1
million
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population
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 which was 1,439
million
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 and 1,380
million
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 respectively.
USA
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The USA
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 was
ranging on
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ranked
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the
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third with 331
million
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 which was less than 4
time
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times
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, compared to
India
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. Indonesia, Pakistan, Brazil and Nigeria approximately 206 - 274
million
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. The
countries
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 with the least
population
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,
such
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 as Bangladesh, Russia and Mexico, had less than 100
million
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. Compared to the 2100 projection,
India
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 will override
China
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 and become the most populated country in those ten top
countries
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, which had 1,551
million
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. At the same time, the
population
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 of Nigeria increased sharply from 206
million
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 to 730
million
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. The
population
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 of
China
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 and the USA fell significantly to 941
million
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 and 478
million
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 respectively.
While
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 the range of Indonesia decreased steeply its
population
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 increased from 274
million
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 to 292
million
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. The
population
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 of Brazil dropped sharply from 213
million
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 to 177
million
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. The range and
population
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 of Pakistan remain unchanged. Some new
countries
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,
such
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 as D.R. Congo, Ethiopia and Tanzania will become the ten highest
population
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countries
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, china, india, million, countries with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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