The table and grap below show information about cinema visits in Auckland between 1995 and 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where releavant.
The presented table and line graph show the average
number
of theatre visits
in Auckland from 1995 to 2003
In this
table, there are two parts of information which consist of percentages of population visits
and the average number
of visits
. Also
, the average number
of different age groups is indicated by four colours.
Overall
, the average number
of cinema visits
fluctuated during the period. It started with 10.3 visits
in 1995, and then
slightly increased to 11.2 in 1997. After that, it sharply dropped to 7.3 in 1999. However
, it rose to 8.4 in 2001 and insignificantly decreased to 8.3 in 2003. Meanwhile, the percentage of the population visiting the cinema was on an upward trend until 2001. It climbed up from 67% in 1995 to 80% in 2001. In addition
, the people aged from 14 to 24 years
old were at the top position. The second place was 25-34 years
old, followed by 35-49 years
old. Lastly
, the senior age 50 years
old or more was at the bottom position.Submitted by Punpun on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visits, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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