The table and grap below show information about cinema visits in Auckland between 1995 and 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where releavant.
The presented table and line graph show the average
number
of theatre Use synonyms
visits
in Auckland from 1995 to 2003
In Use synonyms
this
table, there are two parts of information which consist of percentages of population Linking Words
visits
and the average Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
visits
. Use synonyms
Also
, the average Linking Words
number
of different age groups is indicated by four colours.
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Overall
, the average Linking Words
number
of cinema Use synonyms
visits
fluctuated during the period. It started with 10.3 Use synonyms
visits
in 1995, and Use synonyms
then
slightly increased to 11.2 in 1997. After that, it sharply dropped to 7.3 in 1999. Linking Words
However
, it rose to 8.4 in 2001 and insignificantly decreased to 8.3 in 2003. Meanwhile, the percentage of the population visiting the cinema was on an upward trend until 2001. It climbed up from 67% in 1995 to 80% in 2001. Linking Words
In addition
, the people aged from 14 to 24 Linking Words
years
old were at the top position. The second place was 25-34 Use synonyms
years
old, followed by 35-49 Use synonyms
years
old. Use synonyms
Lastly
, the senior age 50 Linking Words
years
old or more was at the bottom position.Use synonyms
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visits, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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