The chart shows the results of surveys in one African country asking teenagers the main reasons for using their phones between 2016 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart shows the main reasons for using
phones
by teenagers in an African country between 2016-
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2019
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and 2019
Overall
, the main reason
for using phones
over the years was for social networking, followed by emailing but
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decline
over the years. Making calls was the least popular reason
for using phones
, while
the use
of phones
to use
the camera remained relatively stable.
Social networking was by far the most comon
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common
reason
for usage of phones
from about 50% in 2016, although
it saw a very slight decline
over the years 2017 and 2018, the need to use
social networking rose to about 56% in 2019. Although
emailing remained the second most reason
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phones
from 2016-
2017 with about 25%, it slowly saw a gradual Change preposition
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to 20% in 2018 and 19% in 2019 making it the 3rd most popular reason
for using phones
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The need to use
phones
to take pictures was not very popular from 2016-2017 as it remained in 3rd place with about 15%, although
it saw a gradual rise in 2019 to 18%, moreover
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phones
was not a very popular need right from 2016 and it remianed
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, though not very significantly to 5% in 2019.Submitted by mshkrp2 on
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