The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The layout illustrates the
at
present and future developments of the Islip town centre
Looking from an Change preposition
apply
overall
perspective, town
going to transform to Correct article usage
the town
next
level with new roads connecting four sides .Modern bus station , shopping centre Correct article usage
the next
as well as
car parking will be constructing
.
Now , Wrong verb form
constructed
town
Add an article
the town
having
Wrong verb form
has
school
and housing Correct article usage
a school
on
Change preposition
in
south
, Add an article
the south
main
road Add an article
the main
on
the middle ,Change preposition
in
shops
on both sides of it . Countryside on north and park on Correct word choice
and shops
east
connecting main road .
In future , Add an article
the east
an east
dual
carriageway Correct article usage
a dual
passing
through all the sides and will be in Wrong verb form
will pass
circle
shape with one way in and Add an article
a circle
other
way out .shops Correct article usage
the other
on
Change preposition
in
Correct article usage
the norther
norther
will Correct your spelling
northern
replace
with bus Wrong verb form
be replaced
station
,shopping centre ,Fix the agreement mistake
stations
car
park Correct word choice
and car
as well as
a
brand new houses .Pedestrians will replace Correct article usage
apply
main
road . Change the article
the main
Other
side of Correct article usage
The other
shops
will have more housing .Correct article usage
the shops
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