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The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The layout illustrates the
at
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present and future developments of the Islip town centre Looking from an
overall
 perspective,
town
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the town
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 going to transform to
next
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the next
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 level with new roads connecting four sides .Modern bus station , shopping centre
as well as
 car parking will be
constructing
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constructed
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. Now ,
town
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the town
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having
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has
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school
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a school
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 and housing
on
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in
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south
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the south
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 ,
main
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the main
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 road
on
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in
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 the middle ,
shops
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and shops
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 on both sides of it . Countryside on north and park on
east
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the east
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 connecting main road . In future ,
dual
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a dual
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 carriageway
passing
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will pass
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 through all the sides and will be in
circle
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a circle
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 shape with one way in and
other
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the other
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 way out .shops
on
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in
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the norther
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norther
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northern
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 will
replace
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be replaced
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 with bus
station
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stations
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,shopping centre ,
car
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and car
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 park
as well as
a
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apply
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brand new houses .Pedestrians will replace
main
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the main
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 road .
Other
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The other
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 side of
shops
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the shops
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 will have more housing .
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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