The graph below shows a number of tourists visiting a particular carribean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the number of visitors who travel to a Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017. The unit on the Y-axis is shown in millions.
Overall
, it is clear that
the trend of tourists visiting the island increase
throughout the period. Replace the word
increased
However
, They changed their decision from staying on the island to cruise ships.
To begin
with, people around 1 chose the Caribbean isle
as their destination in 2010. The number steadily rose to 1.5 in 2012 before noticeably jumping to 2.5 in 2014. The slight growth to nearly 2.7 was seen in 2015 Replace the word
island
then
levelled off at this
level in 2016. It surged and reached a peak at 3.5 at the end
of the period.
Additionally
, the total of visitors staying on-shore was 0.8 while
staying off-shore registered 0.3. On-shore option
stayed at the same number in 2011, meanwhile, off-shore Fix the agreement mistake
options
option
escalated to 0.5. They both fluctuated until 2016 when staying outland surpassed inland, which was at 1.5 and 1.3 respectively. The gap was continuously wider to 0.5 in the year 2017.Fix the agreement mistake
options
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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