You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday • describe some possible disadvantages • say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer
Dear Nilu,
I hope you are doing well. I think
this
upcoming summer is going to be the best summer ever. I really appreciate your idea to go camping because we have never done that before, and it will be a remarkable memory for everyone.
I know you are excited to experience the camping because we can enjoy as much as we want without any distractions. I have an idea about a place near a river where we can go for a swim, do
fishing and kayaking.
Unnecessary verb
apply
However
, there are some difficulties to face while
camping because we do not have many facilities at the camping site. Furthermore
, we have to be well prepared for everything, especially cooking and toileting. I am pretty sure we can manage those kinds of things.
I would love to join you in this
exciting adventure. I am eagerly waiting for a quick reply from you. Let us arrange a date as soon as possible and I’ll start to collect the stuff for the camping.
Best Regards,
LahiruSubmitted by lahiru_80 on
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Task Achievement
To further improve, consider adding more detail about why you think your friend would specifically enjoy camping, such as enjoying nature or the simplicity of living outdoors.
Coherence & Cohesion
For even better coherence, you might also explore connecting your ideas more explicitly, using transition phrases that clearly show cause and effect, contrast, or sequence.
Coherence & Cohesion
You did a great job of structuring your letter, with a clear introduction, development of ideas, and a conclusion.
Task Achievement
The friendly and encouraging tone throughout the letter is perfectly suited for writing to a friend about a shared potential adventure.
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