A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called ‘The book that influenced me most'. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter -describe what this book was about -explain how this book influenced you -say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to
expree
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express
my interest in the scholarship program offered by the university. I am looking to
enroll
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for the fall intake, for the popular course Diploma in Dara Analytics at the
instituition
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institution
. Unfortunately, when I looked at the website, the tuition fee was too high to afford upfront. Over the
last
few years, I have enquired about universities that offer Data Analytics but I
choose
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this
esteemed university for its commitment to student learning, quality of education, and top-notch alumni who have been
successfull
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successful
in their industry. I hope to achieve success with the training that will be provided in the course. I have overcome numerous obstacles to obtain exemplary grades in my academics and I believe that I would be the right choice as I have full determination and strength to excel in
this
programme as well. With the scholarship, the course will be affordable for me and I will be able to be as a
steo
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step
closer to being successful in the industry. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully. Praveen Ghanchi
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task achievement
Ensure your letter addresses all points of the task directly and concisely.
coherence cohesion
Use paragraphs to organize different ideas for better understanding.
general
Re-read your letter to check for any spelling or grammatical errors that could be easily corrected.
task achievement
You have effectively introduced the purpose of your letter and expressed enthusiasm for the course and university.
coherence cohesion
Good use of paragraphs to separate different points.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • influential
  • perspective
  • transformative
  • introspection
  • universal
  • timeless
  • contemporary
  • resonate
  • inspiration
  • genre
  • anecdote
  • relevance
  • beliefs
  • motivations
  • significance
  • courteous
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