the graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017
The line graph compares how many tourists visited a particular Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
, the three different Linking Words
company
stayed on the island and on cruise ships in the time period. Fix the agreement mistake
companies
While
the number of Linking Words
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callers
caller
staying on cruise ships and islands increased gradually, the total rose rapidly.
As the graph shows, Fix the agreement mistake
callers
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foreigners
foreigner
staying on cruise shipsFix the agreement mistake
foreigners
in the beginning
was around 0.25 in 2010. Add the comma(s)
, in the beginning,
Then
went up slightly to 0.5 in 2011, but declined moderately to approximately 0.27 in 2012. Afterwards, guest staying started climbing gradually to 2 between 2013 and 2017. The number of Linking Words
caller
staying on an island in the beginning was around 0.75 in 2010 and kept unchanged until 2011. Fix the agreement mistake
callers
Then
it grew significantly to 1.5 from 2011 to 2013 and remained constant til 2015, but fell slightly to approximately 1.3 in 2016. After jumping sharply to 1.5 in 2017. Regarding the total, in the beginning, was 1 in 2010. Linking Words
Afterward
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Afterwards
Afterward
total caller increased gradually to around 2.7 between 2010 and 2016. The total Add a comma
Afterward,
visitors
rose quickly to 3.5 in 2017.Correct quantifier usage
number of visitors
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