the graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017

The line graph compares how many tourists visited a particular Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017.

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stayed on the island and on cruise ships in the time period.

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caller

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staying on cruise ships and islands increased gradually, the total rose rapidly. As the graph shows,

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foreigners

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staying on cruise ships

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was around 0.25 in 2010.

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went up slightly to 0.5 in 2011, but declined moderately to approximately 0.27 in 2012. Afterwards, guest staying started climbing gradually to 2 between 2013 and 2017. The number of

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staying on an island in the beginning was around 0.75 in 2010 and kept unchanged until 2011.

Then

it grew significantly to 1.5 from 2011 to 2013 and remained constant til 2015, but fell slightly to approximately 1.3 in 2016. After jumping sharply to 1.5 in 2017. Regarding the total, in the beginning, was 1 in 2010.

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total caller increased gradually to around 2.7 between 2010 and 2016. The total

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rose quickly to 3.5 in 2017.