the chart below shows the result of a surevey about people cooffe and tea buying and drinking habits in five australian cities

the chart below shows the result of a surevey about people cooffe and tea buying and drinking habits in five australian cities
The bar chart gives information about the
numbsr
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number
of humans consuming
diffirent
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different
type
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types
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of drinks in five cities Which is Sydney Melbourne Brisbane
Adelaide
Hobart town.
Owerall
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Overall
, it can be clearly seen that
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the
he
consuption
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consumption
of drinks
experenced
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experienced
experience
km dramatic sales . In Sydney Melbourne Hobart towns
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more sold
coffe
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coffee
or tea
then
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than
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Adelaide
and Brisbane As the bar chart shows various
cites
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cities
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drinking
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tea or coffee.
Firstly
in
sydney
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significantly
fresh
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more fresh
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coffee and instant coffee around 43 and 48
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however
went to cafes more than
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others
. Truning
second
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bar chart and Hobart cities
shows
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the same pointers. Coffes around 43 and 40
another
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lines
the
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same. Regarding
to
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Brisbane town's drinking tea or
another
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other
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swallows higher than
Adelaide
towns. But
also
Adelaide
showed lower indicators compared to other cities.
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