The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007.

The given chart illustrates the number of people who came from a foreign country to visit places

such

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coast

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the coast

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,

mountain

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mountains

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and

lakes

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in a European country from 1987 to 2007. To commence with, in 1987, the coast had already been on the top with 40,000 people in a year . It

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noticeably decreased , in 1992, to approximately 35,000 visitors

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steadily rose to more than 70,000 people in 2007.

Although

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,

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the

lakes

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took the first place , in 2002, by showing the result of 70,000, meanwhile

lakes

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and mountains had an equal number, in 1992, with 20,000

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individuals. But

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mountains

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the mountains

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had

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slightly increased in 2007 (25,000).

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, only 2 areas showed a huge increase in 2007,

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lakes

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had an increase in 2002. Only the mountains illustrated a low result during all these years.

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lakes

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had a drop in 2007 and coast only in the

beggining

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beginning

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