The bar chart shows the percentage of Australian boys and girls (school pupils) attending 4 different sports activities after school in 2010.

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The chart illustrates the proportion of Australian males and females who participated in swimming, football, netball, and basketball after school hours in 2010.

Overall

it is clear that

boys

were interested in football and basketball,

while

girls

enjoyed swimming and netball more than

boys

However

, the rate of

girls

who did not engage in sports was higher than that of

boys

. Regarding swimming,

girls

had slightly more members than

boys

, with approximately 16%, compared to around 13,5% for

boys

. Obviously, the number of football and netball players for both genders was more than the other three out of five categories, with 20% and 2% for

boys

, in comparison to 4% and 17% for

girls

, respectively.

Moreover

, the figure for basketball members nearly 8% of school

boys

were involved, slowly more than female pupils who took part in

this

game.

By contrast

boys

were not as many as

girls

in doing no sports, with 4% and 5%, respectively.

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