The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree courses. The table shows the salaries of anthropologists in work after 5 years.
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, the number of workers with 50000 to 75000$ significantly increased by 10% and the rate of individuals who earned more than 100000$ slightly climbed by 5%.Submitted by bakhti on
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