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The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree courses. The table shows the salaries of anthropologists in work after 5 years.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree courses. The table shows the salaries of anthropologists in work after 5 years.
#anthropology #graduates #university #courses #salaries #anthropologists #work #years
The pie chart illustrates what is the destination of Anthropology graduates from a university and the table depicts the
amount
 of salary which anthropologists earn after 5 years
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services
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It is clear that
 most of
graduated
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the graduated
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peoples
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people
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 in
this
 field have Full-time work and working for the Government sector had the most income. Regarding the statistics what stands out from the scheme is that
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 over half part of
graduates
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the graduates
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with
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52% had
a
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Full-time
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full-time
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 work. It is noticeable the Part-time sector had 15% and Unemployed persons showed 12% which means that
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 they had a minimal difference.
Moreover
, both the Full-time
post grad
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 students portion and the Not known segment had the same
amount
 (8%). Focusing on the Part-time work individuals with
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study
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clarify
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 that,
this
 group had the fewest
amount
 of members with 5%. looking closely at the graphs show that, Freelance consultants were in the lowest point of revenue with 5%
which
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earned from 25,000 to 50,000 $
while
 in the highest
amount
 of income with 40% they had earned between 75000 to more than 100000$.
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, half of
employees
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the employees
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 in the Government sector made more than 100000$
also
,
45
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and 45
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% received between 50000 and 100000$. It is remarkable that
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 in Private
companies
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companies,
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 25% of people had
salary
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a salary
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 from 75000 to 100000$
however
, the number of workers with 50000 to 75000$ significantly increased by 10% and the rate of individuals who earned more than 100000$ slightly climbed by 5%.
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