The line graph gives information about the number of Iranian, Greek and Turkish students who enrolled at Sheffield University between 2005 and 2009.
The line chart provides
a key information
about the Remove the article
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number
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students
at Sheffield University between 2005 and 2009 from three countries Iran
, Greek and Turky
. The units are measured in Correct your spelling
Turkey
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the numbers
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of Fix the agreement mistake
number
students
.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that Greece
had the highest number
of enrolment
between the three counries
in 2005. Correct your spelling
countries
In addition
, Iran
had the lowest number
of enrolment
in 2005, whereas
the number
of enrolment
increased and it became the highest in 2008.
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what is shown, Greece
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number
enrolment
at the begin
of 2005 but over the years it faced a significant drop in Replace the word
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espicialy
from 2005 to 2007. By 2007, Correct your spelling
especially
Greece
and Iran
had become the same amount of 60 students
enrolment
but it did not last
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Greece
's enrolment
droped
a tiny amount, and went to the lowest Correct your spelling
dropped
number
by 2009 with approximetly
40 Correct your spelling
approximately
students
.
In terms of Iran
and Turky
, they Correct your spelling
Turkey
begun
with Add the auxiliary verb
began
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lowest
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the lowest
enrolment
compered
to Correct your spelling
compared
Greece
. They faced a notable increasing
from 2005 and 2009. Replace the word
increase
Iran
had the highest student enrolment
with almost 160 students
and Turky
above 120.Correct your spelling
Turkey
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