The table and pie chart show the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010.
The table and chart below illustrate how many research
students
in Australian colleges in 2001 and 2010
Overall
, even though it was still dominated by local students
in 2010, the total students
in Australian colleges has increased considerably over ten years, especially the number of international Correct quantifier usage
number of students
students
which was
doubled.
In detail, back in 2001, only 13% of the research Unnecessary verb
apply
students
were foreigners, the rest were native. At that time, the number of male students
was as same as the females for local pupils, in which about 43% both. Meanwhile, the bigger percentage of international students
was males. A distinct pattern occurred in 2010 when males were
dominated the local Unnecessary verb
apply
students
but with a change in proportion, which was about 39%. On the contrary
, the number of international females
Change the noun form
female
students
exceeded the male ones which accounted for 15%, made
a slight difference to males Wrong verb form
making
that
recorded at 12%. Correct pronoun usage
which
Moreover
, in 2010, the scale of foreign students
became twice Rephrase
as larger
larger
Correct word choice
large
than
in 2000.Change preposition
as
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