The table and pie chart show the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010.

The table and pie chart show the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010.
The table and chart below illustrate how many research
students
in Australian colleges in 2001 and 2010
Overall
, even though it was still dominated by local
students
in 2010, the total
students
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in Australian colleges has increased considerably over ten years, especially the number of international
students
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doubled. In detail, back in 2001, only 13% of the research
students
were foreigners, the rest were native. At that time, the number of male
students
was as same as the females for local pupils, in which about 43% both. Meanwhile, the bigger percentage of international
students
was males. A distinct pattern occurred in 2010 when males
were
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dominated the local
students
but with a change in proportion, which was about 39%.
On the contrary
, the number of international
females
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students
exceeded the male ones which accounted for 15%,
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a slight difference to males
that
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recorded at 12%.
Moreover
, in 2010, the scale of foreign
students
became twice
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larger
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than
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in 2000.
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