The maps below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.
These two maps depict a public
park
in two distinctive timelines, one is for the the first day after the opening of this
place in 1920, and the other one is for today.
Overall
, we can see a lot of changes have happened in this
area and turned this
park
into a recreation park
for all individuals, moreover
, the only thing that remained unchanged is the rose garden which is located in the north-west of this
area.
Firstly
, the Fountain in the middle of this
park
from 1920, was destroyed completely and turned into an enormous rose garden, surrounded by four seats for people. Secondly
, on the west side of this
area
a massive Amphitheatre for concerts was erected which used to be a Stage for musicians back in 1920.
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area,
Thirdly
, the rose garden and Pond for water plants in the northeast were removed instead
, we can see a new cafe and a Children's playground on today’s date.
Lastly
, these days, there is a Water feature close to Eldon Street ,also
, near this
Water feature, we can see an underground car park
for individuals, they both were built in the same place which used to be a glasshouse and some seats in 1920.Submitted by abbasisarina340 on
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