The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart below provides data on estimated world illiteracy rates by 6 different regions and by sex for the previous year.
Overall
, it can be seen that the illiteracy of women
exceeds men
's in all 6 regions (developed countries
, Caribbean, East Asia
, Sub-Saharan Africa, Arab States, South Asia
), but the highest rate is recorded in South Asia
and the lowest in developed countries
, surprisingly the gap is more than 50 percent
.
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per cent
To begin
with, the top 3 countries
where education is not spread between men
and women
are Sub-Saharan Africa, Arab States, and South Asia
. Whereas
in developed countries
, Caribbean and Oceania illiteracy rate are
much lower, to compare them in detail it can be seen that in developed Change the verb form
is
countries
the proportion of unlearned men
is around 1 percent
and Change the spelling
per cent
women
a little higher than this
but in South Asia
, the proportion of illiterate women
is under 60 and men
over 30 percentages.Submitted by madinabonu.bm on
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